After showing my first draft to one of my lecturers, my storyboard has a really nice opening but struggles to explain the relationship between my two characters. I need to show that these two characters are friends and live in this house together, so i decided to add in some drawings of the character cooking and both characters interacting with a hello gesture. I think this is much better than the first draft and explains the relationship a little bit better. But i feel something still needs adding...
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